Narration research- Marley and Me

This is an extract from Marley&Me a book that again is written in first person. It-like the film Spirit's narration uses descriptive and emotive language.

 

I like this extract because...

• It uses a lot of descriptive language
• It is similar to my own as although in first person it talks of an event in the past
• It talks about the "woods" and "trees" similar to my own narration

What have I learnt from this extract?

• To use descriptive language as it can help the audience begin to build a picture